I really like this image, though I'm not sure I'm capable of pulling out the best result of how good I imagine it could be. I made adjustments in photoshop and lightroom, and did the best I could. I think it looks nice, but, still question how it could be made even better. Regardless, I really like all the spotty patches and the interesting quality it plays with the background, creating an energetic pattern of spots everywhere. Angela's conveying great emotion, and is so pretty as she seems to be coming straight out of a woodland storybook, with that great tree winding its way around her.
As a whole this is a good photo. I like the way the leave set the environment. It is really beautiful how the figure is posed. I also like how the tree interacts with the figure. I also like how the figure and the tree become one movement. One thing I can suggest is to do a worms eye view. It seems that you have the horizon in the middle. The only problem with that is it make the image more static. Try some risk like kneel down and photographing or a over shots (birds eye view). Have the model more off centered. I looked though your gallery and mandy brickd rctngld is a good example of this risk taking. Bombshell also seems to have the worms eye view. It does not have to be exactly like those two but they do have that energy. It is a beautiful picture but it can have a little more dynamic energy.
This is a fun idea with the figure walking under the tree. This does remind me of some travel photos. It show how we can interact with the environment. This one seems to have a inner child vibe to it with her pose as she is losing her slipper and looking curiously at the tree.
Okay One thing you can improve on in technique is sharpening the image. It seems a little blurry around the edges. When I look at her face closly it seem blurry. The AF point selection may be the problem. Try to figure out how to read it and adjust it. Some cameras you can pick which AF point you are interested in such as upper, and this helped me on some land scape when I set it on auto focus.
For the most part it is a nice photo even though you can take more risks in the angle and try to get a more crisp photo. I do love the figures pose and the expression on her face I see a lot of emotion. The why she has her sandals almost slipping off seem very playful.
This is a cheerful image. It looks like you've used the art history brush tool for a part of that tree branch that the woman is holding. Did you combine images to create this work?
This is a fun idea with the figure walking under the tree. This does remind me of some travel photos. It show how we can interact with the environment. This one seems to have a inner child vibe to it with her pose as she is losing her slipper and looking curiously at the tree.
Okay One thing you can improve on in technique is sharpening the image. It seems a little blurry around the edges. When I look at her face closly it seem blurry. The AF point selection may be the problem. Try to figure out how to read it and adjust it. Some cameras you can pick which AF point you are interested in such as upper, and this helped me on some land scape when I set it on auto focus.
For the most part it is a nice photo even though you can take more risks in the angle and try to get a more crisp photo. I do love the figures pose and the expression on her face I see a lot of emotion. The why she has her sandals almost slipping off seem very playful.
Overall this is a good photo.
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